Monday, December 16, 2013

First After NaNo Post!

Well, as you can see from the edited header here, I managed to write those last 8,000 words on the 30th! How the hell did I do that? I would really like to know myself!

Chapter 8 End
In Which a Life is Threatened

When morning arrived, Larkin’s horse still had not. Shula still lay wrapped in Zija’s bed roll and with the men standing watch in turns during the night, only one had to make do without even the small comfort the padded blanket provided. She slept through Larkin checking her wrist, and explaining to a concerned Seok that he did not know if it would get infected as he did not know what newly infected wounds looked like, as well as the men breaking camp and tying their bags back onto the saddles.
            
Larkin, though he was no doctor, could recognize a fever. When he had picked up Shula’s wounded wrist that morning her skin had felt as if it were on fire. Putting the back of his hand to her forehead, he felt for her temperature there too. It was cooler than her wrist, making his concern about Cain’s suggestion of poison and Seok’s questions about infection grow. He knew that the flesh near a festering wound was fevered, but poison could do the same thing and either would also give the victim a fever as their body tried to fight the affront to its system.
            
The group had only three horses for five people plus the bags they carried. Zija and Cain stood talking about their route, and how the trek would take longer now that the horses would be carrying two people each. Seok joined the conversation, adding, “Shula needs a real doctor. No offence to Larkin or anything, but he doesn’t know what he’s doing any more than I would. I’ve never seen her sick in my life, any more than I can remember being sick.”
            
“How long have you known her exactly?” Zija asked.
            
“Didn’t you know? That kiss back in the shelter on the mountain was because I remembered that I knew her from before.” Seok shook Shula’s shoulder to wake her.
            
“Ok, you’ve been with Cain for four years. So that makes you what; you guys grew up together or something? Shit!” Zija glanced at Cain who rubbed his fingers together, pantomiming holding money. “Who the hell would randomly go kissing their childhood friends like that?”
            
Shula, now awake and climbing to her feet with her wounded wrist clutched against the blood soaked fabric at her waist put a smirk on over her grimace of pain. “If that’s all that confusing this’ll really throw you off. We’re engaged, Red.”
            
That got everyone’s attention. Zija gaped, swiveling his head to look between the two of them. Cain’s eyebrows rose in speculation, disappearing behind his shaggy blond bangs. Larkin, who had been rolling up the bedroll Shula had just vacated, had stopped to stare, much like Zija, while Seok pretended not to have heard. Zija managed to close his mouth long enough to comment, “When did you get engaged, when you were five?”
            
Shula smiled, “It’s not that odd for children to get engaged is it?”
            
“Now I really wanna know what’s going on here! Your families get you two engaged, and then the brat loses his memory, then who tied him up in that cave?”
            
“Our families didn’t plan it, we decided. If the Bitch had known she’d have had our asses chained up sooner than they were.” Shula’s words contained all the malice she felt for the woman who she termed the bitch, but they were given in a voice that carried none of the energy or fight that Shula usually showed. Her voice was tired.
            
“Priti knew,” Seok said. “He probably did tell her.”
            
“That stick in the mud?” Shula squinted from a ray sunlight that had just crested the trees. “He’s so formal and polite all the time, why would he have anything to do with her?”
            
“You forgot his other name didn’t you? Kama?” Cain watched this continued conversation carefully, though both Larkin and Zija had lost interest. The names Shula and Seok were using were actually words in the language of the gods. Priti meant affection and kama meant lust. He tried to remember why those words sounded familiar, not just as vocabulary, but as if it was something he had read then forgotten until now.
            
“You’re too stubborn to argue with and I don’t have the energy when it’s this cold,” Shula snapped at Seok, who had continued to describe the characteristics of the man who had known about their engagement. Seok reached out and grabbed Shula’s arm. It was radiating heat under his touch. “It’s not cold, you’re sick.”
            
“Whatever,” she replied, “Let’s just get going. I’m tired of standing here doing nothing.” She leaned back on Seok, looking as if she would collapse right there.
            
Because the weight of the riders had to be distributed evenly, Larkin ended up riding on Zija’s horse, because his gelding was the largest and strongest of their mounts. Cain got most of their bags behind and in front of his saddle, and Shula and Seok were to ride together like before, with Shula in the front this time. She was dizzy and reeling where she stood with feet solidly planted on the ground, and  Seok and Larkin both worried that she would fall out of the saddle if Seok did not have his arms firmly around her waist.
            
The party set off, looking rather woebegone riding double and with all their belongings tied to one saddle. Shula said little throughout the day, only complaining once of her arm hurting when the horse stumbled in a hole some animal had dug in the path. Several times she complained of the cold, asking Seok piteously for a blanket, until he broke down and wrapped her in another layer of the scarves she had used when crossing over the mountain. Holding her close, he worried about just how hot her body had become. This kind of heat was just not natural.
            
A sudden thought came to him and he dug Shula’s wounded arm out from among her wrappings. She protested the movement, but did not jerk her hand out of his grip for fear of hurting herself further. Shula whimpered as the young man held her arm up to look at the bandages. Her bracelet had been pushed back almost to her elbow to keep it out of the way of the bandages. Seok pursed his lips while looking at it. This was not good. Whether she wanted it or not, he was going to tell Cain what was really going on. He could not risk Shula dying because of something like that.

            
The group unanimously decided to continue on while dusk approached. At the rate they were going they would reach Lord Death’s Temple within two hours, and they were all looking forward to getting there and having a decent meal, a roof over their heads, and even one of the temple’s cushioned mattresses that they laid on the floor in place of beds seemed better than another night on the ground like the last four they had spent. Shula had fallen asleep, leaning against Seok’s chest when by the time they reached the high outer walls of the temple.

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